You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter: -Explain what you need. -Say when you plan to be there. -Ask for information about prices.

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter in order to rent studio flat in the center of Singapore. In
this
way, we are two person, and we need a clean and calm studio flat with all types of facilities and possibilities,
such
as twin bed and separated bath and washroom.
Furthermore
, we arrived at that city next week on Sunday morning at 9:00 o’clock.
In addition
, we would stay in that city for five nights. From
this
perspective, it is really important for us to everything will be done about reservation and so on so forth.
Hence
, that would be very kind of you if you tell me about the cost of the rent studio flat for five nights and the possibilities of paying. Thank you in advance for your help, Sincerely, Kambiz Pirzad My contact information is as follows: [email protected] And you can contact me on
this
number as well : 00989175758005
Submitted by kambiz.pirzad on

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task achievement
Ensure clarity by specifying that 'we' refers to the individuals traveling and include a brief description of their needs.
coherence cohesion
Improve the flow by connecting ideas more smoothly, particularly when listing needs and expectations.
task achievement
Clear explanation of needs such as cleanliness, calmness, twin bed, separated bath and washroom.
coherence cohesion
Includes all necessary greeting and closing elements in the letter.

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