Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Nowadays, some inhabitable areas

such

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as Shara desert or the Antarctic are going to be tourist’s

destination

Suggestion

Destination

. There are merits and demerits to check out these places that will be discussed.

Firstly

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, traveller’s interests have been increasing over

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last few years

Suggestion

the last few years

for having holiday in, in the middle of nowhere without any facilities.

In other words

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, tourists would like to have a break from modern life, gain a different experience and life live the way their ancestors had. To illustrate, a place with no electricity, phone reception and internet connection that allows them to be relaxed, enjoy the nature, and forget about

difficulties

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the difficulties

of life. It

also

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, provides a quality time to work on themselves, as there is no distraction either Facebook’s messages or unpredictable calls from work.

Therefore

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, theses worthy peace that comes from

this

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kind of trips, tempting people to try it.

Secondly

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, there are many challenges if unspoiled places are chosen for vacation. It would not be easy to live

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with

no access to routine amenities,

for instance

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, water pipe to take

shower

Suggestion

a shower

, brush teeth or wash clothes. It might put people at risk of sickness when hygiene is very low.

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, if

any injury

Accept comma addition

any, injury

or incident happens, receiving emergency help will not be guaranteed.

That is

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why, travelling in

such

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a place with difficult conditions, might need to be more cautious. In conclusion,

although

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travelling in the nature is very adventures and would be great quiet place to take a break, there are many risks involves.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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251 words

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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