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Nowadays, people always throw old things and have new things, in the past, old things were repaired and used again. What factors cause this phenomenon? What effects does the phenomenon lead to?

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In
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 contemporary world, economic success helps people improve their living
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, they tend to buy modern products willingly and throw away old things. I agree that the advance of technology and attractive advertisement lead people to buy the latest products,
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, there are detrimental effects that are undeniable
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 as exploitation of natural resources, or industrial waste.
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, thanks to
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 development of technology that improves the manufacturing industries, companies now are able to produce a mass number of goods.
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, the consumer can buy the latest products for a reasonable price.
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, fascinating advertisements promote products and encourage people to buy or upgrade the latest models as well as pursue consumers to get rid of the old products. Despite the benefits, the success of manufacturing is on the rise that leads to the overwhelming exploitation of raw materials
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 as trees, oils, and metals that will be soon used up due to the manufacturing of new products.
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, throwing older things
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 have negative effects on the environment because huge amounts of toxic waste are being discharged into the environment, which directly contaminates water or soil. In conclusion, a large number of consumers are attracted to the latest products in advertisement and technology because of their undeniable benefits.
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, people should
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 raise awareness about recycling old things to prevent detrimental effects on the environment.
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