Many cities around the world these days are becoming more and more polluted. Why is this happening? What solutions can you suggest?

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In the contemporary world,
Pollution
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covers all the parts of the world. The people are a vital reason behind
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matter. Predominantly, The human population have been increased an enormous density compare with the old century.
Pollution
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could be controlled and monitored by the
government
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and it depends on the
country
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management. It is likely to discriminate between the countries
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as Low development
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, Under development
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, Developed
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.
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can be classified into several categories
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as Air
pollution
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, Water
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, Road
pollution
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.
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, India is the
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largest population in the world compare with the landscape. There are places well maintained by society and as well as the general public. Even though, certain areas were caused by severe
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pollution
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pollution, such
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as rivers, tourist spots, public roads. Those places were covered by wastrels
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as Plastic bags and wastages which have not vanished at all. The reason for
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is that human's etiquette. Extensively, Those people have not educated and followed the guidelines. It creates a serious deficit to human. In my opinion, The
government
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should be taking action all over the areas which had affected severely by people. The
government
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intends to get rid of wastrels and surveillance of those areas of
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staff. They must be imposed a penalty those who have not complied a rule. In conclusion, As discussed above stated that
pollution
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could be controlled completely in certain countries,
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- The United States of America, The United Arab Emirates, Australia, The United Kingdom and European countries have met those areas because of strict rules and regulations.
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, Those countries made a decision that how to clear and maintain the unpolluted
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with the support of the public.
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, They have not accomplished their goals. Eventually, The
country
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would be clean and tidy
pollution
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.
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