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Nowadays, pollution and waste levels are increasing rapidly. How does this affect ordinary people? What steps can be taken to overcome this problem?

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The rise in
pollution
 is one of the greatest
concern
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concerns
 among the nations these days.
Although
, its increase has posed a serious risk to the present human lifestyle, a number of solutions can be significant in order to abate the rising levels. Indeed, the current level of the
waste
 in the environment is at its peak. The air
pollution
 has given birth to the smog, which is the mixture of fog and pollutants. The smog in the air is quite dangerous for the human respiratory tract, due to which face masks are mandatory for every person breathing in the environment, irrespective of the race and gender. These face masks are quite
cheap but
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cheap, but
 the awkward lifestyle change is difficult to adopt. Another serious issue due to
pollution
 is the
water
 contamination. The tap
water
 is not suitable for drinking these days and who knows if it gets any
better
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better, therefore
therefore
, the governments all around the world has advised to boil it before its usage.
This
 problem has
cause
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caused
 a serious difficulty to manage things for mankind, because in order to boil the
water
, the storage cans and boiling pots are needed to manage the
water
 supply in a common household. Though, numerous problems are faced by the people these days due to ever increasing pollutants, there are several steps that can lessen the
waste
 levels.
Firstly
, the industries
are advised
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is advised
 to manage the
waste
water
 treatment plants at their own end.
Secondly
, every house can segregate its
waste
 into recyclable and plastic before disposing it into the community bin.
Thirdly
, vehicles that
produces
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produce
 lead based and carbon based
waste
 can be scrapped by replacing it with environment friendly ones by providing decent incentives to the person owning
such
 vehicles. In conclusion, the fact that the risks of increasing
pollution
 are numerous to the common man is not new, but a few easy moves can be made in order to tackle the hazards caused by it.
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