The internet was probably the most significant invention of the last 30 years. Without it, our lives would be completely different. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The Internet is recognized the most integral invention of the
last
three decades. All of the people's lives would be completely different without it. I do not totally agree with
this
extent because everything
has its both
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has both its
sides. In the positive way,
Internet
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the Internet
plays a central role in so many aspects of modern life. For education, it helps us to get more information to improve our knowledge.
Instead
of waiting to ask our teachers or friends, we can search the web to find keys. It provides us a good approach to self-study.
Moreover
, we can
use
the Internet to communicate with each other using things like email or Facebook, Twitter, etc.
For example
, when we want to communicate with our friends and families, we do not need to spend much time going to their home. By accessing an email or other forms of social networking site for a moment, we enable to contact with them.
Futhermore
in addition
Furthermore
, we can
use
the Internet for work, for leisure and even for shopping. To sum up, the Internet is becoming more and more important in our modern lives.
Although
the Internet is useful and essential for people, it is not for all. Nowadays, our lives are gradually
developing but
Accept comma addition
developing, but
in some areas, people here are still poor. Their lives are lack of many things so the Internet is probably luxury for them.
However
, there are things that they need more than the Internet. Its
use
cannot help anything
for
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in
their lives.
For example
, someone invented a device that
purify
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purifies
polluted water for people who live near polluted place or river.
That is
what the Internet cannot do.
Moreover
, without it, the life of human keeps going on happily and peacefully.
For instance
, there is a place where people do not
use
the Internet. Local people are still happy and friendly. They meet face to face each other so often;
therefore
they can remain their good relationship among the community. In short, for some people, the Internet cannot change their lives despite its benefits. In conclusion, we cannot underestimate the significance of the Internet. For many people, it would change their lives completely and make them better. And for others, there are things that are more significant. So these are reasons why I do not totally with that statement. 
Internet
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The internet
has become one of the most vital parts in our lives and it is considered as the most significant invention of the
last
30 years. Someone said that our lives would be completely different without it. I do not totally agree with
this
statement because it can be true for many people but not for others.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global village
  • Telecommunication
  • Internet of Things (IoT)
  • E-commerce
  • Digital literacy
  • Cybersecurity
  • Telecommuting
  • Disruptive technology
  • Virtual reality
  • Artificial intelligence
  • Digital divide
  • Information superhighway
  • Cyberspace
  • Online presence
  • Smart technology
  • Data encryption
  • Cloud computing
  • Social networking
  • Streaming services
  • Remote collaboration
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