Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, due to the low income rate in the art industry, some people believe a demand for government's financial

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is necessary. In my point of view,

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is redundant because the

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may go to the wrong person, and artists these days can earn more easily with the help of technology. It is notable to mention that not everyone is worthy of the fund

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of the difference in each individual's commitment and talent. To be specific, not only will it certainly be a waste of

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to hand out

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for those who lacks the potential and passion for their career, but it will

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be unfair

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real artists as the fund may not reach all those in need.

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, some people may take advantage of

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for their own interest. People in the field that are too dependent on funding run a risk of stop producing quality works

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take up too much

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, time and

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earnest and conscientious activity intended to do or accomplish something

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take up the job by any means to get

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from the government Another significant aspect worth pointing out is traditional ways of selling artworks are no longer efficient

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utilizing the use of technology creates better promotion. By advertising their products on social media, artists can reach a wide range of people interested in the industry, and they can earn extra income by sharing techniques, tutorials on

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YouTube

or other platforms.

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, the development of online shopping apps help artists boost their sales. Without the need of a physical gallery, they can save a great deal of

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while being able to sell their masterpieces to international potential clients. In conclusion, the government

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needs

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be given to the right person based on strict

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a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated

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, and artists should be more active in choosing more effective channels, like the internet, to maximize their source of income.