Most people today own a smart phone. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the whole world experienced one of the greatest technological inventions, the
smartphones
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, which significantly influenced
humans
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human
activity in different fields.
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mobile phones have some shortcomings, from an individual perspective, smartphone is a positive
development
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which can lead to the substantial improvement in various fields. The smartphone
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considerably impacted business.
Firstly
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, with the
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of these devices, in business industries developed a network for customers in their devices.
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By
which they can get instant feedbacks on their products and services.
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,
payments
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the payments
could be sent and received by
wireless terminal
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the wireless terminal
in their
smartphones
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. Another major advantage is to students. More students agree that with the help of
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smartphones they
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smartphones, they
can create documents as well as immediately upload them to
teacher’s electronic folder
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the teacher’s electronic folder
teacher’s electronic folders
a teacher’s electronic folder
.
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, teachers can view the documents instantly,
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keep them permanently stored.
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,
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gadget has proved an asset in
healthcare
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health care
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this
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handheld
device
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, doctors can access patient information,
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research, medical
literature, and securely communicate with patients and colleagues.
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, the
device
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has some drawback over the conventional
cellphone
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cell phone
it has gradually replaced. The major drawback of
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device
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the device
is that it is addictive and spending too much on it can isolate us from the real world. The reason for
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is that people get stuck in feedback loops, exchanging their time for momentary bursts of dopamine, no different from any other drug addict.
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,
this
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device
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isn’t too reliable, as you aren’t sure whom you are talking to, unless it’s a video call. To sum up, the pros of modern communication technologies are far more than their cons. So, I think that
development
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of
smartphones
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can be positive
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I suppose that it will be
favorably
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favourably
influenced in our future.

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