In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this

Lack of housing is an issue in a lot of places that can be solved by having new buildings in the countryside. It is believed that rural areas should be protected, and civilizing must be stopped. I totally agree with
this
view and will discuss my opinion.
Firstly
, wildlife has been affected by civilization in different ways. Many animals are going to be extinct by human modern life. To illustrate, house drainages are end
to
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of
the rivers while animals drink the water.
Electricity
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Electrical
wires and cables are everywhere that endangers animals to be electrocuted.
Moreover
, dumping glass bottles in
streets
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the streets
, might injure birds that looking for food.
Therefore
, environmental protection is more important than
creation
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the creation
of habitable places for the humans.
Secondly
, developing urban area requires railways and roads to make access for dwellers to be connected to the community. So, many forests are at risk and trees should be axed. It is plainly visible that
this
process influences
environment
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the environment
and ecosystem. Specifically, the cycle will be repeated by growing population and impact the global.
That is
why more protective policies and legislation should be formulated by government to preventing urban expansion in
countryside
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the countryside
. In conclusion,
although
there is a shortage of home in the cities and people’s need of having
place
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a place
to live should be
fulfil
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fulfilled
, I strongly believe countryside should be kept unspoiled.
In other words
,
this
cycle will be nonstop and in
long term
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the long term
has a negative impact on
environment
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the environment
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Ecological benefits
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Sustainable development
  • Eco-friendly building materials
  • Green architecture
  • Government policies
  • Urban sprawl
  • Infrastructure
  • Smart planning
  • Agricultural lands
  • Rural areas
  • Population growth
  • Environmental sensitivity
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