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You are thinking of moving to a new country. Outline some of the factors and questions you must consider before you make a final decision.

#country #outline #factors #questions #decision
Many persons are fond of
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
.
some
Suggestion
Some
 of them like to move to a new country, my family would
also
 like very much to live in New Zealand and we are seriously thinking of applying to migrate there.
there
Suggestion
There
 are many issues,
however
, that need to be considered before a decision can be made.
this
Suggestion
This
 will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. One major question concerns the effect on families.
when
Suggestion
When
 one family decides to seek a new life in a new country, they nearly always have to leave members of their family behind.
this
Suggestion
This
 can be particularly difficult for elderly parents who suddenly lose the support of a son or daughter. Another issue, of course, is education.
children
Suggestion
Children
 who move to other countries are confronted by powerful challenges.
they
Suggestion
They
 have to master a new language, make new friends, feel like outsiders, at least for some of the time, and learn new patterns of
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
this
Suggestion
This
 can cause stress unless there is sensitive support from parents, who themselves will be
dealing
Suggestion
dealt
 with adjustment issues in any new society.
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