You are thinking of moving to a new country. Outline some of the factors and questions you must consider before you make a final decision.

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Many persons are fond of

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

some

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Some

of them like to move to a new country, my family would

also

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like very much to live in New Zealand and we are seriously thinking of applying to migrate there.

there

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There

are many issues,

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, that need to be considered before a decision can be made.

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this

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This

will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. One major question concerns the effect on families.

when

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When

one family decides to seek a new life in a new country, they nearly always have to leave members of their family behind.

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this

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This

can be particularly difficult for elderly parents who suddenly lose the support of a son or daughter. Another issue, of course, is education.

children

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Children

who move to other countries are confronted by powerful challenges.

they

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They

have to master a new language, make new friends, feel like outsiders, at least for some of the time, and learn new patterns of

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

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this

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This

can cause stress unless there is sensitive support from parents, who themselves will be

dealing

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dealt

with adjustment issues in any new society.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

178 words

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You are thinking of moving to a new country. Outline some of the factors and questions you must consider before you make a final decision.

Fully explain your ideas

in some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in what are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Some people believe that the widespread use of technology in education has improved learning, while others think it has led to more distractions and decreased the quality of education. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Most people believe that social media such as facebook and instagram negatively impact on society and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

You would like to reduce your working hours in order to study part-time. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter • explain why you want to reduce your working hours • say which hours you would like to work • describe how your part-time studies would benefit your employer