In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this

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Lack of housing is an issue in many areas that might be solved by having more constructions in

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. It is believed by some people that lands and jungles should be protected from civilization. I totally agree with the idea and think protecting

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is a vital act. I will discuss my opinion in the following. Nowadays, wildlife has been affected by civilizing in many ways. A lot of animals are encountered either to be extinct or be killed by human modern life. To illustrate, house drainages end to the rivers while animals drink the water. Electrical wires and cables are everywhere that endangers animals to be electrocuted.

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, dumping bottles and plastics in the streets, might injure birds that looking for food.

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ought to be conserved.

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, developing urban area includes changes in the environment.

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, many forests are at risk and trees should be axed, as railways and roads are required to make access for dwellers. It is plainly visible that

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process is a cycle, which will be repeated by growing population and impact the ecosystem and the globe.

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why more protective policies and legislation should be formulated by government to preventing urban expansion in the

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. In conclusion,

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there is a shortage of home in the cities, I strongly believe

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should be kept unspoiled and wildlife conservation need to be prioritised, because population is growing and by continual constructing,

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the countryside

is going to be ruined and ecosystems definitely will be affected.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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256 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Urbanization
Ecological benefits
Biodiversity conservation
Carbon sequestration
Sustainable development
Eco-friendly building materials
Green architecture
Government policies
Urban sprawl
Infrastructure
Smart planning
Agricultural lands
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