“People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest making it easier?”

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Today, people often find it difficult to adapt to

new

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new situations

the new situation

a new situation

situation

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For example

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, when you have

first

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child

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or you have an

illness

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.Whereas, you need make some changes in your

live

Suggestion

life

lives

Moreover

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, it is harder than it seems.

For example

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when you

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are being

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illness

Suggestion

ill

.I think there have many

cause

Suggestion

causes

why you are ill.

For example

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caught a cold or drank something cold.

Firstly

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, when you are ill your daily routine is changing.

Second

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, you can’t do things that you do before your

illness

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.Today lot of people using internet to

cures

Suggestion

cure

their

illness

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or using traditional medicine.But many doctors

not recommend

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don't recommend

aren't recommending

use

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using

internet

Suggestion

the internet

to cures.I think the best way to adapt

this

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situation

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with

illness

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just go to

doctor

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the doctor

a doctor

and consult with him. Not just

illness

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can make difficult with

adapt

Suggestion

adapting

new

Suggestion

new situations

the new situation

a new situation

situation

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Likewise

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situation

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when you have a

child

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, or baby.You will have problems with sleep and

whole time

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the whole time

you need

spend

Suggestion

to spend

for your

child

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.You must responsibility to your

child

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and it is even harder than seems.But to adapt

this

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situation

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, I think you need

just consult

Suggestion

to just consult

with other mothers that have more experience and consult with

doctor

Suggestion

a doctor

doctors

. In

summarize

Suggestion

summarizing

, adapt to new

situation

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harder than it seems.All examples below

provides

Suggestion

provide

it.In

short to

Accept comma addition

short, to

adapt is easier, you need some help from others.Like consult with your doctor, when you ill or take advice if you have a baby.

Saitama YochiTue Jul 14 2020

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

221 words

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“People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest making it easier?”

Your opinion

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspaper and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that these forms of media will never disappear. What is your opinion?

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You live in a block of flats, your neighbour makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord.

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