How widely do you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? What problems it cause?

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personal life

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spending too much time at work

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all over the world. There is a wide range of factors that account

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is happening. In my opinion,

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situation can be remedied provided that some effective measures are taken. There are

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myriad reasons

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soaring concern, unlike everyday

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, which can be dealt with easily,

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of time, which is extremely perilous can lead to an array of issues as a relationship problem and

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of children. Thanks to the aforementioned predicaments, it can not only people

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but

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society can suffer immensely.

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, most of the companies put workloads on their employees with tight project deadlines.

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, in order to meet the deadline, they have to work late

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. Steps to deal with

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problem are many, but the most important is in fact not only remote and unexpected, but

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accessible and practicable. The primary one

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that by ensuring

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and policies, government authorities can help a native thrive.

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, international

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and local authorities should take all necessary initiative cumulatively. Only when convergent efforts from all sectors are ensured, can we expect to see some considerable progress in curbing the issue.

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, dealing with work-life balance is one of the prevailing problems that

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people all over the world.

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steps discussed above can effectively strengthen the fight against and alleviate

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growing issue. Its potential impact is indeed too dire to ignore.