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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The statement that nobody will buy printed newspapers or books in the future because information will be free online is based on some assumptions. It could be possible if there’s
access
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 to electronic devices, adequate
electricity
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 supply, free or affordable internet
access
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 and a total removal of the already existing payment options
on
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for
 online materials. As it stands today, not everyone has
access
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 to electronic devices like mobile phones, computer etc. Even some of those that have it do not know how to operate them effectively. So accessing online books or newspapers will be a mirage if
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 gap is not filled. Assuming it is filled, there is
also
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 a behavioural pattern of some people
where
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were
 even when they have
online version
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an online version
online versions
the online version
 of books still prefer printed copies for ease of
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 and reference. Maintaining electronic devices
comes
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come
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electricity which
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electricity, which
 is still a major lack in some countries. The lack of
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 supply is most likely going to persist in the future as only
few countries
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a few countries
 are making concerted efforts towards meeting the ever-increasing
electricity
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 demand of its increasing population.
Access
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 to online materials needs an internet
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 which is sparsely available in many countries. Even in some places where it has penetrated, government policies witch-hunt its full implementation
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 limiting
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 to few online materials.
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, the idea of buying still exists even as of today in online materials as some newspapers or books cannot be accessed unless one pays or buys them.
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, whether it is bought printed offline or online, a payment is still made so no difference. In conclusion, I strongly disagree that nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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