IN some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation ?

In
this
world, having own
house
is every individual dream and people struggled to purchase their
house
. In India, owning a
home
is
vital
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vitally
important than staying in
rented
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a rented house
house
.
This
essay will discuss about
importance
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the importance
of owning
home
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a home
homes
and their positive or negative situation.
Home
is
basic need
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a basic need
of human being and purchasing or constructing own
house
is considered as financially stable and settle
in
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into
their life. When person started earning,
First
he
think
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thinks
to save money and invest to stay in his own
house
rather than purchasing
car
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a car
.
For instance
, I myself purchased
apartment
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an apartment
in Mumbai after staying 2 years in
rented
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rented houses
a rented house
house
which gives me great comfort and satisfaction.
Also
home
is a good investment than staying in
rented
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a rented house
house
. I believe that owning
house
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a house
is
better option
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a better option
than as
tenant
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a tenant
tenants
. In continuation towards positive aspect of owning
house
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a house
which
create
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creates
asset and gives
return
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a return
the return
after one or two decades. In
present condition
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the present condition
present conditions
, investing
sum
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a sum
of 100 thousand dollars in buying
apartment
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an apartment
, definitely appreciate after
period
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a period
of time and will give you return more than
Bank fix deposit
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the bank fix deposit
the Bank fix deposit
. My father purchased
house
15 years back in
sub urban
relating to or characteristic of or situated in suburbs
suburban
area of Mumbai of cost of 200
thousands
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thousand
and presently cost of
this
property is doubled.
However
, investing in
house
need huge sum and it has to
complete
compete for something; engage in a contest; measure oneself against others
compete
with bank loan which could be
burden
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burdened
in
future
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the future
and has to financial compromise in
few
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little
things. As I am having
home
loan, need to think twice about budget for family tour
in
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on
vacation. To conclude, I feel that investing in buying own
house
in
early age
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the early age
of life and creating asset is a good option but some financial arrangement has to be done for paying
home
instalment. Every individual should have their own place where they can relax satisfactory.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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