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Many people go to university for academic study. More people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers

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- Many people argue that people tend to study at universities rather than
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
 in the
vocation
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vocational
 training courses in today’s modern world.
Therefore
, there is a shortage of human resources
such
 as
eletricians
a person who installs or repairs electrical or telephone lines
electricians
electrician
, plumber
,
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,
etc.
Personally I
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Personally, I
 completely agree with the view that modern people should be promoted to attend
vocation
 training
.
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.
 There are two reasons why people should do
vocation
 training.
Firstly
, they give the opportunities for students, who can continue learning another program when they
can not
can not
cannot
 have a great result in the national exam. It’s significantly reduced the myriad of unemployments all the
country
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countries
.My cousin is a case in point. He has a great job after 3 courses at Engineer training
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
.
Secondly
,
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,
 not all of the student graduates from the different kind of universities can find out, great career, even some of them will be unemployment or working a job with
low salary
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a low salary
. Apart from the benefits expressed above, I believe that the
vocation
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vocational
 training
also
 creates a balance between manual work and white-collar job. If everyone has taken the academic courses about finance, accounting at college,
thenthen
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then then
 who would solve the problem relate to electricity
,
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,
water in hospitals and schools.
Furthermore
, the knowledge of about apprenticeship programs can be easily applied in real life, whereas the academic theory sometimes different from the reality.
For instance
, people can not use the
fomula
a group of symbols that make a mathematical statement
formula
 probability statistics to solve the problem in real
life but
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life, but
 they can use the range of Electric skill to fix the electrical circuit. In conclusion, for the reason I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that the society should be encouraged everybody to learn apprenticeship programs
.
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If we do not have different types of jobs
,
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,
 we
can not
can not
cannot
 function an economy effectively.
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