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Some people are happy to spend the whole of their life living in the same area. However, others prefer to live in many different areas over their life time. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

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In the modern era, some masses feel a blessed, and happy to get the opportunities to live in various parts of the world, but others want to spend whole
life
 in a single
place
. Now, I will discuss both views and my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, numerous people
habbit
expect and wish
hoped
 to spend their whole
life
at
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in
 the different places because they want to increase their skills and knowledge as well as people know about the various cultures, and traditions.
For example
, a huge amount of students
go
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goes
 to abroad and other states for their higher education and a job, and they feel happy to spend their
life
at
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in
 the various places.
Also
, folks meet with
number
Suggestion
a number
the number
 of people in the world when they move from one
place
 to another
place
 even, they learn various languages. On the flip side, some people want to spend their
life
 at a single
place
 because they
depends
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depend
 upon their parents for their basis needs.
For instance
, the child of farmers depends upon their
parents
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parents'
 business in their future, and they think it is typical to survive away from home.
Moreover
, in rural area, parents do not allow their children to live away from home and they lost a number of the opportunities in their
life
 which helps to enhance their future. In my opinion, nowadays, everyone busy in their
life
 due to their job and some masses
get
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gets
 the opportunities from their company to go various locations due to their work.
Also
, some people want to take
break
Suggestion
a break
 for their
headech
something or someone that causes anxiety; a source of unhappiness
headache
headaches
 schedules and make
trip
Suggestion
the trip
a trip
 at popular
place
 which
helpd
give help or assistance; be of service
helped
helps
 to make their career best and they increase their skills and
parctical
concerned with actual use or practice
practical
 knowledge. To
conclude it
Accept comma addition
conclude, it
 can be said that, living at the different location is necessary for everyone and
its
it is
it's
 good to interact with different kind of people as well as mind relaxation, but its negative effect on younger and society because some time people forget their cultures.
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