Today more a more tourists are visiting place where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places?

Nowadays it is possible for people to visit desert places.
For example
, Sahara Desert and Antarctic.
This
essay will discuss what are the mains advantages and disadvantages to know them. The
first
benefit is that tourists can know extreme conditions that they never have seen before.
Such
as, temperatures around
of
from a particular thing or place or position
off
-60C, the biggest ice mountains and exotic animals. The
second
benefit is that visitors can enjoy unique places in the world because of there are not similar places. The
third
benefit is that tripper can do recreation activities.
For example
, to sky on the iceberg in the Antarctic and to rise camel on
Sahara Desert
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the Sahara Desert
.
Finally
, everyday tourism companies are improving their prices, plans and payment facilities,
also
they
area
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are a
doing agreements with
embassy
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an embassy
to facilitate the process of visas.
On the other hand
, there are the disadvantages regarding to facilities. Because of, there are almost no restaurants, hotels, public transportation or hospitals.
For instance
, in 2010 the Nigerian Government promoted an expedition for tourist from all over the world ensuring excellent amenities.
Nevertheless
, many people got sick from bad health conditions.
As a result
, they lost weight due to
diarrhea
frequent and watery bowel movements; can be a symptom of infection or food poisoning or colitis or a gastrointestinal tumor
diarrhoea
, stomachache and fever caused to expired food and to drink non-potable water.
Consequently
, some people are afraid to visit these spots because of
that the
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that, the
new was in all
newscast
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newscasts
of the world.
Furthermore
,
transport system
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the transport system
was not enough to move the patients. On balancer,
therefore
, extreme places are becoming more
demanded
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demanding
by tourist despite of countless benefits and drawbacks that it
can has
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can have
. Being the most interesting Sahara Desert and Antarctic.
Submitted by Mauricio Vargas on

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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