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Some people think that government should spend money on faster public transportation, while others think that there are other more important priorities such as health care and the environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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People have different views about whether government should invest in more fun
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 the development of faster public transportation or on more urgent issues
such
 as poverty and
health
 care.
This
 essay will discuss both views and provide my personal insight.
To begin
 with the positives of innovation of the faster transportation, It can improve the quality of people’s lives. In modern society, everything has changed fast and conveniently. Time is considered as one of the most valuable things in life by majority of people. By reducing the commuting time, modern people do not have to feel stress caused by traffic
hour which
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hour, which
 is irritating and they can do something else during the time rather than being stuck in the traffic. It will definitely be what today’s people want the most. Meanwhile, some critics assert that there are more urgent issues that need to be dealt with than the traffic. I believe that some of the problems occurring in somewhere in the society
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are
 directly related to people’s
lives
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lives, such
such
 as diseases,
health
 care, poverty and environmental problems. These issues should be the priority over the innovation of the technology as it is highly likely to affect the
health
 and survivals.
Therefore
, I strongly think that nothing can be put before
this
 primary issue. In conclusion, despite the enormous benefits that result from the development of the transportation, all the things that are connected to people’s lives and
health
 should be prioritized over than any issues.
Submitted by Seonhee Moon on

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