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more and more companies are allowing employees to work at home.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

#companies #employees #work #home #development
In
this
 tech-savvy world, multinational companies are encouraging work from
home
to
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with
 their employee.
However
, I believe, their harmful impact outweigh the benefits. Office
life
 gives active
life
 to
working person
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the working person
working people
, while working at
home
 provides sedentary
life-style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
lifestyles
.
Consequently
, a person may have to face various health related problem.
For example
,
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,
obesity.By working from
home
,
Accept space
,
an employee just sitting in front of
computer
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a computer
the computer
computers
 and doing his task.So, without any physical movement he would get inactive
life
.
This
 may lead to high-blood pressure and diabetes.The ultra-
violate
any of numerous low-growing violas with small flowers
violet
 rays from computers cause severe
eye-sight
normal use of the faculty of vision
eyesight
 damage. A person
get
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gets
has got
 monotonous
life
 in
this
 working situation.
Firstly
, he would
detached
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detach
 from his office environment because, neither he has any competition nor any friends while working at
home
.Sometimes, he may get into depression due to the loneliness.
Secondly
, an employee become more and more rely on technological gadgets.
Therefore
,
Accept space
,
he gets easily access of any difficulties.
Hence
, human's do not need to do brain storming to get answers
of
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to
 his questions.Owing to the fact that, companies which are providing more work from
home
 facilities are not fruitful for employees. In conclusion, work at
office
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the office
offices
 provides physical and mental activities, whereas from
home
 diminish
this
movements
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movement
 and working man may have to face detrimental effects due to
this
.
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