Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches.
Youth is the
future
of the nation if only nurtured properly, considering this
statement a group of people deem that youngsters
who has successfully completed secondary education should explore or look for some job before admitting the Suggestion
youngster
next
level of course
in any institution. Firstly
, in this
essay we shall discuss advantages and disadvantages along with relevent
examples and concludehaving a bearing on or connection with the subject at issue
relevant
.
To embark with, “what You reap is what you sow” Accept space
.
this
expression in this
context means youngters
are the a young person of either sex
youngsters
future
of tommorow
. Education had been the the day after today
tomorrow
back bone
for any developing countries. a central cohesive source of support and stability
backbone
However apart
from academic Accept comma addition
However, apart
knowledge it
is equally important to get involved with practical life, there are many merits to working before joining the college, it helps in enhancing many skills like better communication, social awareness and decision making. Accept comma addition
knowledge, it
Additionally
, temporary jobs will help in deciding the goals and course
of action to Suggestion
the course
aceive
the same. to gain with effort
achieve
For instance
, most of the teenagers cannot decide their next
move regarding to their future
, they rely on elders
or parents. Suggestion
the elders
consequently
, in many Suggestion
Consequently
cases they
Accept comma addition
cases, they
regeret
joining the feel remorse for; feel sorry for; be contrite about
regret
course
,
by the time they realise it will be too late for a fresh start.
Accept space
,
Nevertheless
, having a year or more gap may lead to drift from concentration and focus. Earning some money at early age
means less dependency on family members. Suggestion
an early age
early ages
This
danger of freedom may lead to diversion and easliy
be influenced. with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')
easily
Moreover
, previous studies will be forgotten if the gap range is more then
12 months. To illustrate, subjects like mathematics and physics should be conjunction used in comparatives
than
continously
practiced. If not cracking at every point
continuously
continually
enterence
exams for desired something that provides access (to get in or get out)
entrance
course
will be difficult and may discourage the student.
To conclude, despite of having a nuemrous
advantages, demerits should be considered and eventually work towards it for the healthy amounting to a large indefinite number
numerous
future
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
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