In the future it will become more difficult to live on Earth so more money should be spent researching how to live on other planets such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The living on Earth will have more problems for
future
generation and people must spend money on developing space technology. In my opinion, I agree that
future
human population should start to spend money for opportunity living on Mars.
First
of all, living on Earth
has become
Suggestion
is becoming
becomes
became
harder every year because of carbon emissions.
This
means that many manufactures throw carbon into the air.
For example
, every year in
Antarctica scientists
Accept comma addition
Antarctica, scientists
fixed many anomalies snowing melt and grew level water in the sea
that is
why the land of the
planet
is flooded. Without carbon emission by manufactures, our
planet
can be saved by people.
Thus
, many people start to move to another area where water does not flood the land and in the
future
a great amount of people have to research the other
planet
for living there. Another point to consider that moving to another
planet
such
as Mars can help in restoring our
planet
for the
future
generation.
In other words
, people can restore the environment
such
as forest, land, mountains and others.
For instance
, restoring our
planet
helps to stop changing global warming because many people who will live on Earth will be to consume in small amounts. Without restoring our environment, Earth can die in the near
future
.
Therefore
, researching new
planet
can help in saving our
planet
. In conclusion, despite people having a different opinion, I think people must research new
planet
for saving a number of people and it will help to restore our environment for the
future
generation.
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