Many elderly people are no long looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Many old people are not being taken care of by their families,
nevertheless
, put in old Linking Words
age
homes or asylums. In these old houses, senior people can be taken care of properly, as well as they can live a social Use synonyms
life
and enjoy Use synonyms
small things
with other individuals of the same Suggestion
the small things
age
. Use synonyms
However
, there are Linking Words
also
drawbacks to be taken into account.
On the one hand, there are many benefits of older citizens putting in senior Linking Words
centers
. an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
Firstly
, it is a better option when there is no one available in the Linking Words
home
to take care of senior citizen, Use synonyms
for instance
, when both the young ones are busy in their professional Linking Words
life
and cannot spend too much time with their parents who need special medical attention, they can be sent to older Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
home
where medical experts can monitor them all time and provide much-needed attention to them. Use synonyms
Secondly
, when Linking Words
a person reaches to
a certain Suggestion
a person reaches
age
Use synonyms
bracket especially
in the late sixties and mid-seventies a person started to feel isolated which is not good for their health, so Accept comma addition
bracket, especially
it
a viable option to send them in it is
it's
this
kind of houses where they can live a social Linking Words
life
with other people of the same Use synonyms
age
.
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On the other hand
, there are many problems associated with sending elderly individuals to Linking Words
old centers
. One problem is that sending them away from Suggestion
the old centre
old centre
home
has many Use synonyms
consequences one of
them is that it drags youth away from traditional values like celebrating holy events, as they are unable to watch their grandparents celebrating religious events like Eid, Ramadan, and other holy events. Another possible issue is that teens are no longer understand the importance of having an aged people around them like grandparents, who can help you in numerous ways with their experience, and guide you according to their knowledge and understanding no matter what the scenario is, which could be extremely beneficial for youth and could be helpful in their upcoming personal and professional Suggestion
consequences, one of
life
.
In conclusion, while there are many benefits of sending aged people in nursing Use synonyms
centers
, lack of traditional values as well as lack of senior influence in the an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
home
which leads to many problems are not negligible.Use synonyms
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