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Some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as unemployed and homeless people. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays unemployed people have become a debatable issue. Critic defends the idea that higher authorities should look after jobless and starving humans. I strongly agree with
this
 aforesaid statement.
This
 essay will discuss both sides of views before coming to a logical conclusion. On the one hand, the central reason why higher authority should help people without shelter and a job is twofold.
Firstly
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if
ministry
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the ministry
 would support them
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they will not indulge in criminal activities
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which result in low rate of crime in the entire nation.
Secondly
, sometime jobless people feel that they are a burden on their family members
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this
 feeling may have detrimental effects on their physical and mental well being
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authority support can help them to stay physically fit.
As a result
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due to rising crime and job related stress on these people, power should provide assistance.
On the other hand
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this
 is not entirely the law's responsibility to take care them. Because,
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the regime
 has many other issues to deal with
such
 a traffic congestion
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juvenile delinquency, indications are few to mention.
Moreover
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individuals need to work harder rather than expecting a favour from others in order to fulfil their basic needs. The union's assistance will discourage other hard working candidate to achieve their targets. To conclude, from aforementioned points, admittedly ministry's powers can lower offences, and help them to stay strong. But it can cause detrimental effects on the tax payer's mind and struggling candidates. If the state will support them
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many heated debates can be in the future for sure.
Submitted by Yogesh Sharma on

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