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College and university students are often asked to do group work. Many complain that this is not fair, but teachers feel that it is very important for people to learn to work in a group. Is group work a waste of student’s time?

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 working is probably a discussed topic
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among
 students and teachers in colleges and universities. While many students complain
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 is a waste of their
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, I would argue that
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work
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 plays an important role that would help not only for learning in schools but
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 for working later. Some reasons below will support my view.
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, working in a
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 at school will help students in solving a big subject in which acquiring many aspects of a problem.
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, the teacher gives out a presentation project about “Environment pollutions and Solutions in developing countries”, one student is hard to cover all aspects
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of
 collecting data, wording for a present and presenting in front of
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the class
 within a short
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.
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 can only be solved in a
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 where each attendant in charge of one aspect.
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,
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 working will creates a
teamwork skill
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teamwork, skill
 that stands as a must-have skill in working. Many companies have to open soft-skill courses that training their
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employees
 for working skills, especially teamwork skills. Since building a project involve many departments, if an individual does not have the ability to
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 or contact smoothly with others, the project should not finish on
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.
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 but not least,
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 working
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 motives shy students to join with others in the class. I myself was hard to stand in front of a crowd in expressing something. After joining in AIT presentation skill class and working in a
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, it helps me much confidence in my job when I have to interpret my
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 with my colleagues. In conclusion, while many students complain about wasting the
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 of
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 working, I do agree with the teacher’s notion that it is very important for people to learn to
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 in a
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