Some say that the standard of behaviour among children has worsened and that this is their parents' fault; others say that schools are to blame. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, it seems that everybody agrees that conventional positive
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
behaviour
expected
from
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of
children have been deteriorated;
however
, there is a hot debate over the reason of
this
issue. Some scholars believe that parents are the ones to blame, but others think it is the schools' fault. In
this
essay I will discuss both sides of the coin. It is without doubt that parents are in charge of their children's
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
behaviours
. In fact, the reason
to
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for
most of teenagers' bad
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
could be traced back to how they were treated at home in their childhood. To illustrate, scientists argue that teenagers, compared to
past
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the past
, have less tolerance and patience, and have become more arrogant. These negative
behavioral
of or relating to behavior
behavioural
traits could be the result of unsupervised exposure to
internet
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the internet
, social networks, and computer games.
In other words
, these types of media and entertainment, if not properly mediated, expose children to content which causes both mental problems and the aforementioned traits.
Nevertheless
, parents can overcome
this
issue by prohibiting children from accessing them, or at least limiting their usage time.
On the other hand
, disciplining children only by parents is not enough if the schools allow them to do whatever they want. Both children and teenagers spend most of their time at school,
as a
result they
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result, they
are more prone to unhealthy content in schools rather than at home.
Although
parents are responsible to plant seeds of positive
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
in their children's minds, it could be completely reversed at school, especially public ones which mostly do not care about student's mental well-being.
Thus
, appropriate arrangements are
also
necessary
at
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in
schools. To summarize, I think both parents and schools are responsible for
children's well-behaved actions
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the children's well-behaved actions
, and to resolve the issue they have to work together. On one side, parents have to teach discipline, and on the other side schools have to maintain that with appropriate arrangements.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • primary influencers
  • mimic actions
  • instilling discipline
  • overindulge
  • set boundaries
  • broken homes
  • emotional support
  • shaping behavior
  • substantial amount of time
  • large class sizes
  • code of conduct
  • discipline policy
  • environmental factors
  • bullying
  • peer pressure
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