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Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?

#meat #diet
Vegetarianism is becoming more and more popular amongst many people because of
healthy
Suggestion
health
 risks and people strongly believe that plant-based foods should be entered people's rations
instead
 of the traces of
meat
.
However
, I completely disagree with the statement that people do not need to intake
meat
 to have a healthy diet. There are various reasons why we ought to
consumpt
meat
-related foods in our meals.
Firstly
, many
vitamins which
Accept comma addition
vitamins, which
 are of vital importance to our health derives from animal sources and not all nutrients we should eat on a daily basis exist in vegetables.
Secondly
, because of existing hat and high
proteins
Suggestion
protein
meat
 prevents
variety
Suggestion
a variety
 of chronic diseases and keeps
cardiovascular system
Suggestion
the cardiovascular system
 in balance.
Thirdly
, intake of
meat
 helps muscle growth, boosts energy levels as
meat
 is the best source of vitamins and minerals like zinc and iron.
Hence
, I am inclined to argue that totally cutting out of the consumption of
meat
 is
improper option
Suggestion
an improper option
 for
healthy diet
Suggestion
a healthy diet
 as our whole organism is irrevocably tied to nutrients existing in
meat
.
However
, there are still some advantages to take into consideration before concluding about vegetarianism.
This
 means that a healthy vegetarian diet is rich in vitamins and has
low
Suggestion
lower
 fat portions.
Therefore
, it is very helpful to combat with diabetes and
obesity especially
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obesity, especially
 in
elder
advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
 sections of society which derive from
meat
 consumption.
Moreover
, plant-based foods provide a wide range of
healh
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
high
-promoting nutrients for bodies and can make our immune systems better. Summing up, for the reasons mentioned above it seems to me that we should
consumpt
meat
-oriented meals because it has too much to offer.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
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