Some people say that educational success most of the time depends on having a good teacher . Others say that student attitudes also do matters. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Success
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in
education
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depends on several factors. A few individuals opine that
success
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in academics
rely
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relies
upon a qualified tutor while others believe that it depends on
child’s
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a child’s attitude
attitude
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towards studies. I agree with both the views and
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essay will provide the reasons why
success
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in
education
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depends upon both teacher as well as
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attitude
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the attitude
of a child
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with the reasons behind school of thought that having a good mentor is essential to achieve goals in studies.
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, Teacher plays a pivotal role in the whole
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education
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educational
process by giving understanding of whole content matter to the students. A mentor who has all the essential qualifications and experience to define the subject matter with the help of different teaching methods only can help in achieving
success
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.
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, accurate assessment and feedback which is required for the
fulfillment
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
of goals in life can only be given by a good tutor who have a good observation and know different methods of assessment.
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, a student can score high grades in board exams if he/she would taught by the best teacher who have good knowledge of
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the subject
and could assess his/her progress accurately. Moving towards the causes behind the thought that children’s
attitude
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towards studies
also
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matters. Positive point of view of school goers towards academic studies would force them to study honestly to achieve good grades for better future and they would eventually achieve their goals in life
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Therefore despite
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Therefore, despite
of having good resources of
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education including
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education, including
good educational institution
,
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,
best teachers they would not attain goals and
success
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if
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attitude
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the attitude
is not positive and leading towards
success
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. In conclusion, I believe in order to achieve educational
goals both
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goals, both
good
teacher
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teachers
as well as goal of having good grades or a role model are essential.
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