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It is thought by some that its is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

#city #life #countryside
Cities and countrysides have always been popular choices to live in. While some argue that residing in cities is more beneficial, another group
consider
Suggestion
considers
countryside
 is a better place to live.
This
 essay will discuss both view in depth, as well as explaining why
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 believe one can have a better life in a
city
. Some people believe that in the modern world, living in
countryside
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the countryside
 is a wiser option. Indeed, they regard it healthier both for body and mind. Being exposed to clean air, consuming organic food. And avoid the tension of cities make a village an ideal option for one to reside in.
Hence
, rustic lifestyle has been encouraged and put emphasis on more and more.
On the other hand
, advocates of living in a
city
 believe that in the modern world, only a few
number
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numbers
 of people can resist staying far from the magic of a
city
.
In other words
,
availability
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the availability
 of a variety of facilities tempts everyone to choose to live in a
city
.
For instance
, educational amenities, health care
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
, shopping malls and so many other advantages are accessible
for
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to
 citizens. So, countless merits of living in a
city
 cause most people choose to
emmigrate
leave one's country of residence for a new one
emigrate
immigrate
migrate
 from villages. In conclusion,
although
 life in
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
 can be more peaceful and somehow healthier, the numerous advantages of living in a
city
alwas
at all times; all the time and on every occasion
always
 surpass. People who live in a
city
, are hardly able to tolerate the still life of a
countryside
 unless for a short period of time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • metropolitan
  • infrastructure
  • cosmopolitan
  • commute
  • sociocultural
  • prosperity
  • sustainability
  • rural
  • tranquility
  • urbanization
  • relocation
  • residential
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