You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.

Dear Sir, I am Saurabh Padhiyar,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am the
tennent
someone who pays rent to use land or a building or a car that is owned by someone else
tenant
tenants
who rented your 3/47 grotto street, property.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am writing
this
letter to draw your attention to some of the
furniture
issue which
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
having.
as
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As
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have been living
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was living
here for
last
5 months.
the
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The
furniture
in
this
house is pretty old and need to be replaced.
However
, since
last
few days my kids have been complaining
of
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about
some kind of insect biting.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
was shocked when
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
check the
bed i
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bed, I
bed I
found bedbugs in
mattress
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the mattress
a mattress
mattresses
and the tiny fluffy warms are crawling inside the wood frame of
bed
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the bed
.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
spontaniosly
in a spontaneous manner
spontaneously
call
paste
a serious (sometimes fatal) infection of rodents caused by Yersinia pestis and accidentally transmitted to humans by the bite of a flea that has bitten an infected animal
pest
controller and they came
last
night they had
check
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checked
all the
furniture
and did some paste control treatment and they suggest me that it should be ok for
time
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the time
being but will be back after
few days
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a few days
the reason behind
this
is they have their egg
every where
to or in any or all places
everywhere
in the house. As you know it can cause very serious health consequences,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would request you to replace the possible
furniture
aspecialy
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
specially
the
kids
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kids'
bed as soon as possible.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
hope you will come up with good news.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am looking forward to hear from you soon. Your sincerely Saurabh Padhiyar
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