Many people are copying famous celebrities from magazines and TV. Why is this happening? Do you think it's a good idea to copy celebrities?

I think in some cases it is good and in some cases it is bad.If you are following good person, it will help us to do so many things for our family and country.But if you are following his life style
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fasting it will not help us to build a good personality. Actually, people do not know about their behaviour but they are attracted by their characters which are played in movies or tv.They are
also influence
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also influenced
also influencing
by the attention these celebrities are getting from the public.In Indian some people copying
this actors
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these actors
this actor
and they are risking there and others life. We always should have
ability
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the ability
to filter,
thenthen
(psychology) a state of mental or emotional strain or suspense
tension
then then
only we can achieve in our life.Elders will tell too much honey is not good for health that means if we are taking honey small amount it is a medicine for us
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if we are taking it too much it is a poison.So in my opinion copying is good, but don't copy too much it will destroy our own personality.
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