There is an increasing trend of old people living longer in many countries around the world. Do you think this has a positive or a negative effect on the population as a whole?
In todays' advanced medical era, the
life-span
of people the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifespan
are increasing
by more than 20-30 years, advocating a greater percentage of Suggestion
is increasing
old
people within the total population of the world. Suggestion
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trend is enforcing changes on
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people are entitled for more aid from authority, including pension to home-based Suggestion
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to sometimes shelter and food. Of course, the family is labelled priority, but still their state of living is majorly reflected on
the government in most of the countries. Suggestion
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For example
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people is affecting the younger generation and an interesting observation was made in that which came out in the light regarding how the GDP of a nation is getting affected by Suggestion
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. If ministry is required to spend most of its revenue on old people, where there is no return of
investment, it is only considered to be the mindless use of money. Suggestion
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Moreover
, if the taxes paid by adults are distributed in old people and not in the welfare of country
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the country
then
it is going to drag down the economy eventually.
Whereas old
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in experience in the living lifestyle of a family and the professional give help or assistance; be of service
aid
work
required in any industry. For example
, if an Indian citizen wants to move to Canada to work
further
, the hiring company will hands down going to prefer the more experienced applicant. Same applies to a family, if both the parents are working, children are going to stay with their grandparents; this
will not only reduce the family members getting affected by depression and build Suggestion
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To conclude, there are similar positives and negatives around the population of the world getting affected by increasing number
of old people, making it difficult to gravitate towards one or the other. On one side, the family environment and skilled Suggestion
the increasing number
an increasing number
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on the other hand
most the administrative income is invested in giving them an upgraded life.Submitted by Ainu on
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