Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#school #age #eighteen

Everyone

spend

Suggestion

spends

their

first

eighteen years in a

school

for their

secondry

being of second rank or importance or value; not direct or immediate

secondary

education as

Accept comma addition

education, as

there is a limit in all countries that a student has to complete his/ her matriculation class in a

school

, but they have a choice for

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

two years

whather

binary compound that occurs at room temperature as a clear colorless odorless tasteless liquid; freezes into ice below 0 degrees centigrade and boils above 100 degrees centigrade; widely used as a solvent

water

whether

rather

spend in collage or

school

. In my opinion, I strongly agree that a student should continue till the age of eighteen because of

atmosphere

Suggestion

the atmosphere

of the

school

and study requirement. The essay will

futher

to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)

further

discuss both facets of a proposal with appropriate examples and

reachs

reach a destination, either real or abstract

reaches

reach's

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Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

89 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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