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Living in a country where you have to speak foreign language can cause serious social problems .To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

#country #language
Since ancient
time’s
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 people have been trying to settle in foreign lands and
adapting
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 their
language
 but
this
 is not at all an easy task and can lead to detrimental and deteriorating effects on an individual, family and community. At an individual
level
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 the pressure of learning and memorising
at
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a
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 new
alian
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Italian
alien
language
 can be extremely stressful and frustrating simultaneously. It puts an individual
into
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 mental and physical exhaustion.
For
instance
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 if an individual is unable to speak
the
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 foreign
language
 fluently and clearly it can have serious adverse effects on his job interviews, vocal exams and acquiring
a
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citizen status.
This
 automatically narrows his opportunities to settle in an unknown land and
therefore
 can lead to depression and even suicide. Apart from the critical consequences at
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 level,
pressured
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 to speak a foreign
language
 can result in
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 impact on
overall
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the overall
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 family. As a
family
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family,
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 they lose their cultural recognition and values.
Also
, the elderly and the
youngster
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youngsters
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 of the family might experience what we call “a wide communication bridge” in which the elders want to stick to their native
language
while
 the youngsters intentionally or unintentionally tend to speak the new foreign
language
.
Therefore
this
language
 barrier even widens the already existing generation gap.
This
 weakens the family bonding and acts as a barrier
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sharing one another’s personal experiences and matters.
However
, the most serious issues that arise because of
the
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language
 pressure
is
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 the lack of unity among the community and
grouping
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the grouping
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 of the specific ethnic sects that do not intermingle or interact with people of other countries and backgrounds.
This
 can have social, economic and political drawbacks. It even threatens the national; prosperity by
arising
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raising
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 serious and critical issues like racial discrimination and ultimately results in nationwide unrest.
Although
 settling in a different country can be adventurous it is full of certain obstacles like
language
,
cultural
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and cultural
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 and ethnic variations affecting adversely
on
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individual
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individuals
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,
family
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families
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 and
community
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communities
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. We need to view the wide
prospective
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perspective
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 and weigh the benefits and drawbacks before planning to move and settle in a different country.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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