Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the developed nations were welcomed more number of escapees

also

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fulfilled their basic requirements.

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essay completely agree with

this

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statement because, refugees have lost their

country

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due to natural disaster or war.

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, some displaced persons

are forcedly leave

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are forcibly leaving

are forcibly leave

are forcibly left

their states due to unemployment.

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of all, many people are helpless to staying in their native

country

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. Because,

some time

at some indefinite or unstated time

sometime

they are suffering from a

border

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war between their and other

country

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.

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, they ruined by happened some environmental disaster. In these situations refugees lost their home and business and they must have to

move

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to

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

country

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for

survive

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surviving

their life better.

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, many developed nations around the planet are helping them and provide basic facilities which are necessary for them to live their life better

also

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easily settled in accepted

country

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.

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, at the 2008

border

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war started between

china

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China

and Nepal, during that duration the Indian government accepted around 500

nepalian

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Napoleon

citizen’s in the India.

which

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Which

were stayed nearest the

border

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and badly affected by

border

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fight

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fighting

. Another main reason is

move

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from one United States to other united states is unemployment.

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, multiple men and women are surviving for employment

.

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.

but

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But

, some under development countries are facing unemployment problems. In some countries people

are not have

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are not having

don't have

do not have

a work to earn money and they suffered with starving.

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, the government of those nations has not interested to solve their citizens problems. So, in

these

denotes a person or thing

this

case human beings are helpless and they have to change their

country

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and

move

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to any wealthy

country

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for their better future.

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, developed nations are accepting these displaced people and gives job and shelter for their survive.

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, in the

Pakistan educated

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Pakistan, educated

youngster are jobless and they are

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move

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moved

moving

to USA, Canada, Germany for

job

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the job

a job

jobs

and make their bright future.

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,

this

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developed nations are welcoming them and cooperate

.

Accept space

.

In conclusion, I

also

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favourable with

this

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statement that, the many

well

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good

and rich countries accepted refugees. Because, it is good for world development as well as it show

humanity

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the humanity

of wealthy countries.