Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the developed nations were welcomed more number of escapees

also

fulfilled their basic requirements.

This

essay completely agree with

this

statement because, refugees have lost their

country

due to natural disaster or war.

Although

, some displaced persons

are forcedly leave

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are forcibly leaving

are forcibly leave

are forcibly left

their states due to unemployment.

First

of all, many people are helpless to staying in their native

country

. Because,

some time

at some indefinite or unstated time

sometime

they are suffering from a

border

war between their and other

country

.

Furthermore

, they ruined by happened some environmental disaster. In these situations refugees lost their home and business and they must have to

move

to

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

country

for

survive

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surviving

their life better.

Then

, many developed nations around the planet are helping them and provide basic facilities which are necessary for them to live their life better

also

easily settled in accepted

country

.

For example

, at the 2008

border

war started between

china

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China

and Nepal, during that duration the Indian government accepted around 500

nepalian

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Napoleon

citizen’s in the India.

which

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Which

were stayed nearest the

border

and badly affected by

border

fight

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fighting

. Another main reason is

move

from one United States to other united states is unemployment.

That is

, multiple men and women are surviving for employment

.

Accept space

.

but

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But

, some under development countries are facing unemployment problems. In some countries people

are not have

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are not having

don't have

do not have

a work to earn money and they suffered with starving.

Furthermore

, the government of those nations has not interested to solve their citizens problems. So, in

these

denotes a person or thing

this

case human beings are helpless and they have to change their

country

and

move

to any wealthy

country

for their better future.

As a result

, developed nations are accepting these displaced people and gives job and shelter for their survive.

For instance

, in the

Pakistan educated

Accept comma addition

Pakistan, educated

youngster are jobless and they are

move

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moved

moving

to USA, Canada, Germany for

job

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the job

a job

jobs

and make their bright future.

Thus

,

this

developed nations are welcoming them and cooperate

.

Accept space

.

In conclusion, I

also

favourable with

this

statement that, the many

well

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good

and rich countries accepted refugees. Because, it is good for world development as well as it show

humanity

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the humanity

of wealthy countries.