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Nowadays courses and general study online are getting very popular.However, some people still prefer attending classes in person. Discuss both the views and give opinions

#courses #study #people #classes #person
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With the advancement of technology
,
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,
the trend of following online ways in order to get
education
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an education
 has been increasing since
last
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 few decades. Some masses are in the favour of
this
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 new mode of
learning whereas
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learning, whereas
 other do not want to change the traditional ways of enhancing their knowledge.
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 essay will not only discuss both the
views but
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views, but
 my opinion
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 will be highlighted while concluding
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At
From
 the inception, there are myriad benefits of
talking
very attractive; capturing interest
taking
 online classes. One of them is saying time as well as travelling expenses. While opting for online classes, students do not need to commute from one place to another. They can take classes
just either by
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either by just
 sitting at home or by staying at any comfortable place they like.
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, pupils can save huge time along with
money which
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money, which
 they can use in
other important task
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the other important task
. Apart from
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 learner can get
plethora
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a plethora
 of option to choose from, while commencing any course. Through online ways
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,
 despite being in
countryside
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the countryside
, people can reach out the tutors not
only of other states
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only other states
 but
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 from overseas.
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, people who want to learn any foreign language may find it difficult to hire
highly skilled teacher
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highly skilled teachers
a highly skilled teacher
 and learn from their own place unless they use online modes where native speakers of that language can give
tutions
a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)
tuitions
tuition
 to them in their preferred time On the flip side
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,
traditional way of attending classes have
unpteen
innumerable but many
umpteen
 advantages as well as masses prefer to attend class in person because it makes clear doubts of
subject
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subjects
the subject
. As
,
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,
in class, other students with different intellectual abilities study together, in case, other students enquire about anything on the basis of their confusion,
rest
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the rest
 of the classmates
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 get benefits from it by hearing others perspective.
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 to
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 ,by studying knowledge than studying alone To recapitulate,
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 both modes have their
own advan
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an education
tages to the students, I advocate that new ways of getting education should be adopted by everyone due to its flexibility and worldwide eminent mentors who are there to guide the learners
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