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It seems that with the increase in use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people prefer to write letters. Will the skill of writing disappear completely?

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Nowadays, with the development of technology, the number of
people
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 who are using electric
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such
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 as mobile
phones
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 and
computers
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 is increasing dramatically.
As a result
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, there is a reduction in the proportion of
people
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 who spend time writing letters. In my opinion, writing
skill
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 will not be eradicated entirely. There are two main reasons why
people
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 prefer using smart
devices
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 to write letters. One reason is that
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smart
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phones
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 might be a time-saving method. By using these
devices
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, the
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 of time
people
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 consume on writing could be lessened remarkably,
additionally
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, they could send messages directly to the mailboxes of others in less than a minute.
Secondly
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, the way of presenting documents on
computers
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 or
phones
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 could be more appealing and brighter than on the traditional papers.
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, the ability to regulate the colours of the text and available
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 or patterns could assist
people
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 in decorating their writings.  Apart from the practical advantages that are mentioned above, there are some drawbacks that
people
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 need to avoid while using technological
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 to write a letter.
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,
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phones
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 and
computers
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 always possess the auto-correction function,
hence
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 the ability to detect spelling mistakes of
people
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 could be reduced severely.
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, students who always type documents via
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 would have many mistakes in their essays or assignments when they are required to write by
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.
Secondly
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, the use of smart
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 frequently can result in illegible handwriting.
As a result
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, their writings could not be approachable and sometimes cause misunderstandings. In conclusion,
people
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’s ability to write will
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 over
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time in spite of the enhancement in technological
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.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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