Many people think they fast food companies should not be allowed to advertise while others believe that all companies should have the right to Advertise

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Many people think they fast
food
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companies should not be allowed to
advertise
call attention to
Advertise
while others believe that all companies should have the right to
quick
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Quick
consumption in establishments.
advertise
call attention to
Advertise
. The concept of fast
food
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is a style of eating where
food
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is prepared and served for The sale of fast
food
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in recent years has become an option or alternative for both
companies
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Companies
and people around the world. Many people call it junk
food
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because they
consider
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Consider
it to be harmful to
health
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for not having much nutritional value. Fast
food
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is a
type
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of menu-based
food
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, as its name implies, of fast preparation,
which
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Which
is why it has managed to stay on the market for many years. The success of
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this
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This
type
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of
food
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is the speed of the service,
the low
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lowest
lower
the lowest
prices, the flexibility of schedules
and
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And
the lack of time and money. Mexico is one of the main consumers of fast
food
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due to the fast life and inflexible
hours
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Hours
that most people have due to their daily activities.
This
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topic has become very controversial, because there are people who agree that
fast
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Fast
food
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companies are allowed to advertise, and others do not share that idea. People who think that they should not be allowed to advertise
to
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for
these companies,
are
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Are, for
Are for
for
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example doctors
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example, doctors
, it is because they argue that
this
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type
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of
food
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contains
saturated
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Saturated
fats, sugars, high sodium content and in the long term it is causing
health
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problems
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Problems
in children, teenagers and adults. The most frequent
health
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problems are
obesity
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Obesity
, diabetes, heart disease They
also
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argue that like cigarette commercials, fast
food
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commercials negatively
influence
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Influence
the consumption of people around the world. Companies bombard with
advertising
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Advertising
and most of them don't care to know if they are causing a
health
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problem
since
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Since
their objective is to increase their capital and they say that their intention of the
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food
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Food
commercials
is
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are
to promote the brand and not influence consumption usually. Commercials and
food
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advertising campaigns have served to convince humans that
it
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It
is okay to eat lower quality
food
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more often and in larger portions. A very clear example is children, obesity in them has increased and it is due to the
fact
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The fact
Fact
that it is a very vulnerable population in the face of
this
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type
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of products, calling
attention
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Attention
to the product's packaging, smell or taste, for
this
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reason companies
continually
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Continually
offer promotions.
and
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And
gifts to children, even reaching the emotional
blackmail
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Blackmail
of parents and grandparents. Society currently has changed their eating habits and now they consume more soft
drinks
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Drinks
, sweets and because they are fashionable, they consume light products
thinking
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Thinking
that it is healthier, but
this
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is not the case. Many people go on a diet or want
to
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To
be better and buy these light
products but
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products, but
research that has been done has shown
that
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That
for
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example companies
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example, companies
use a sugar substitute called aspartame and it has been
found
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Found
that it is very carcinogenic, it
also
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causes damage to memory, affects human
behavior
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Behaviour
Behavior
and causes anxiety or nervousness and is mainly found in sweets and ice
cream
the best people or things in a group
Cream
. For
this
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reason, campaigns have been created to educate people and introduce
healthier
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Healthier
foods in schools, cafes, self-service stores,
such
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as changing the name of
products
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Products
, removing images on the wrappings of characters from cartoons and
movies
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Movies
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
that they do not attract the attention of children and use famous people
to
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To
promote healthy habits that can serve so that in the future
food
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promotes
well
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wellness
-
being
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Being
and not disease. They
also
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recommend reading the product labels to better understand the nutritional
information
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Information
, describe the calories in the
food
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, the size of the portion and the nutrients
in
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In
it and
thus
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be able to choose the most suitable for a healthy lifestyle. Now there are people who think it is okay for fast
food
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companies to be allowed to
advertise
call attention to
Advertise
, because even the most successful company has to have a good
marketing
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Marketing
plan to stay in the market. The environment constantly changes, and new competitors appear and every month
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food
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Food
lovers like to try something different every day, so the
food
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companies are
increasingly
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Increasingly
more competitive. Previously, fast
food
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could only be found in establishments and
therefore
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people had
to
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To
queue to get
food
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, move to establishments and that was a great waste of time,
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therefore companies
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Therefore, companies
Therefore companies
have made a great effort to make life easier for us and
they
objective case of they
them
themselves
began
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Began
to change the way they work and that has been a great advantage for the
whole
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Whole
world, since different applications began to be created to bring
food
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closer to
the
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The
house and which
also
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offer you discounts.
This
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has been a great benefit in these times of pandemic, since as the objective is
to
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To
stay at home, only with one entering the application that suits you can obtain in a
matter
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A matter
Matter
of minutes what you most want at that moment, without leaving your house,
having
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Having
to queue and avoid contagion. Possibly a solution is that there
be
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is
a policy that restricts the advertising of fast
food
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during
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During
the hours where
children mainly
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children, mainly
watch television and
thus
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protect their
health
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. Now it is important
from
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for
boys to create healthy eating habits and at an adult age
we
reflexive form of "us"
ourselves
have
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Have
the necessary criteria to know what is good and bad for us, unfortunately
because
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Because
of the fast life that many mothers have nowadays they work and what they
least
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Least
have is time to prepare
food
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and they go as quickly and easily and allow
their
objective case of they
them
children
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Children
to eat whatever, so from there we already have a problem. Fast
food
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is very
delicious but
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delicious, but
you
also
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have to be aware and know that we can treat
ourselves
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Ourselves
to eating
this
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type
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of
food
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only once in a while and create healthy habits
and
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And
try to cook at home, obesity problems are more and more. But it is not just the
fast
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Fast
food
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companies that are to blame and the publicity for the
health
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sector has
also
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failed
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Failed
in all the campaigns it has carried out because there is no consistency and
discipline
Suggestion
Discipline
.
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