Your friend's dog has recently passed away. Write a letter to console your friend. In your letter: · Express your sympathy · Include memories you have about the dog · Invite your friend to do something with you You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___,

Dear Reena, I hope

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letter finds you well and in the best spirits. I am writing

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letter to offer my condolences towards your pet, who passed away in an accident. I know, it is very hard for you to forget him. But I think you have to stand out and face

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situation. Jumba spent a lot of time with you, and he is like a family member to you. He is like a caretaker of your family, but his

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passed away really left us in grief. I missed him badly. As I spent less time with him,he made a special place in my heart. He is very active. Whenever I called him, he came to me and played with me. He was a good companion. I would like to invite you to my place, where we can spend quality time together. I will take you to your favourite restaurants as well, where you will feel better for sure. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon! Best Regards, Sam.

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Aug 31, 2025

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task response

Task response: The letter shows sympathy, memories, and a plan to meet, but some phrases are not smooth. Use simple words and clear lines.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Try to keep ideas in order in short lines. Use simple linking words and check grammar so the text flows well.

tone

The tone is kind and caring.

content

It includes a clear memory of the dog.

structure

There is a clear invitation to meet.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

174 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

sorry
sad
loss
heart
remember
memory
dog
friend
you
I
we
care
here
support
listen
comfort
help
together
come
over
coffee
tea
walk
park
home
story
wag
tail
fur
paws
bone
ball
fetch
sleep
dream
rain
sun
time
moments
forever
miss
missed
gone
love
loved
bright
kind
gentle
brave
small
soft
quiet
still

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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