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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Language has become one of the major barriers in the life of migrants, which causes various practical as well as social problems in people '
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 life. I agree with the given notion and I am going to discuss my viewpoint in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
 with, technology has alleviated the practical problems to the great extent. With the advancement of technology, the issue of language barriers is removed as now there are various apps like Translator and Google maps because of which migrant can easily understand and have access to the foreign language, which made the life of migrant and international students easy.
For instance
, doing a grocery or ordering food from the menu written in a foreign context is no more an issue all because of the new technology, it can be easily translated or they can search it’s meaning on the internet. Others,
however
, myself included, people who migrated from one country to another face various kinds issues and fails to learn native speech. Because of
this
 they are not able to understand rules and regulations, read notices, talk to the local people and most importantly manage their jobs.
For example
, bilingual migrant working in the restaurant face problems with customer and staff not able to understand what they are saying to him.
Moreover
, due to difference in languages migrants
may
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May
also
 not be able understand and learn about new customs and cultures of foreign countries because of which local citizens may not accept them. To conclude,
although
 technological advancement has helped migrant in coping with social and practical issues, yet one do face many problems with learning and speaking new languages. I tend to believe that people before migrating should make efforts to learn the language of that country in which they want to move.
Submitted by Talwinder Singh Gumber on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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