New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Nowadays Cutting – edged technologies are getting more and more advanced. It is an undeniable fact that it took children a lot of
time
to use
technological
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technology
products in their spare
time
. Some people think that using technologies can bring about many advantages. I hold the opinion that it leads to more disadvantages. On the one hand, there are some reasons to explain why technologies advantage for children.
Firstly
, modern technologies can support children for studying by beneficial games.
For example
, playing English games helps children improve their English skills through
fifa
being one more than four
five
, LOL and so on because these games have many new English vocabulary which require them to look for the definitions.
Secondly
, children can relax after studying hours in the school by using modern products
such
as TV,
cellphone
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cell phone
, tablet and so on. A recent survey has shown that activities which children choose to release stress are watching movies, listening music and playing games.
On the other hand
, It can be argued that children are affected negatively by technologies. The
first
reason is that using electronic devices in a long
time
can cause problems related to health
such
as autism, short-sightedness and other serious illnesses. According to recent news, one of the factors causing autism is attributed to spending their
time
playing with portable telephone.
Furthermore
, the detrimental effects of modern devices will exert bad skills related to communication in society or violated behaviours. For explanation, playing games overwhelmingly gives rise to the increasing rate of school violence in Viet Nam. In conclusion, albeit there
are
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is
a lot of constructive
impacts
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impact
of modern devices on young people, its cons overshadow its pros. Parents should control their use of new technologies.
Submitted by Nguyen Nhi on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Digital literacy
  • Cyberbullying
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Inappropriate content
  • Self-learning
  • Screen time
  • Social inequality
  • Enhanced communication
  • Creative expression
  • Educational resources
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