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some jobs are based at a single work place where the hours are the same each day, while other jobs involve frequent travel and irregular working hours. Discuss the advantages of both types of job and give your own opinion about which one is best.

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Learning a foreign
language
 is one of the most important parts of students’ curriculum and it seems to be attention to teach a new
tongue
 should be considered before secondary
school
. In many
countries
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 a foreign
language
 is taught at secondary
school
. In
this
 situation, it is believed that pupils should learn their mother
tongue
 completely at primary
school
 and nothing must distract them from their first
language
.
This
 theory is based on
this
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 fact that the
fundamental
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fundamentals
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 of all languages
is
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are
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 the same and if
individual
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learned
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 the structure of one
language
 correctly, understanding of other
tongue
 would be easy, therefor teaching the second
language
 at secondary
school
 is not necessary. On the other
hands
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, some experts come up with
this
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 idea that the sooner, the better. It is assumed to learn a new
language
, the best age groups are children and teenagers
thus
 for youngsters, learning a new
tongue
 is easier than
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elder
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 and
efficiency
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their efficiency
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of
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them
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is more obvious.
Furthermore
, children can use the other
tongue
 at less
ages
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,
for example
, they can read a story, watch a movie or communicate with a friend from
country
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 of
foreign
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a foreign
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language
 when they are still very young and
this
 subject can ameliorate their abilities and skills. In the general
view
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view,
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 the merits of learning a foreign
language
 outweigh the drawbacks. In conclusion,
while
 in some countries teaching a foreign
language
 is a secondary
school
 curriculum, it is better to transfer
this
 lesson subject to primary
school
 and teach a new
language
 at the same time
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 first once.
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task response
In the introduction, clearly state your opinion on which type of job you think is best. Make sure to address all parts of the prompt, including discussing the advantages of both types of jobs.
coherence cohesion
Improve the logical structure of your essay by dividing it into paragraphs with clear topic sentences for each main idea. Use transition words and phrases to connect ideas within and between paragraphs.

Fully explain your ideas

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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