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Psychologists have known for many years that color can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to color scheme when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement?

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Many scientists have claimed that human emotion depends a lot on
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
. Many people believe we must pay urgent attention to the
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
 schemes used to decorate offices and hospitals.
This
 essay strongly stands by the statement. The importance of
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
 schemes in the office influences its occupants in various ways. The strength of
colour
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
s affects the way we react to them.
Also
, choosing the right
colou
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
rs not only adds beauty but is
also
 a premise for endless creative inspiration at work that can impact both your employees and target customers’ perceptions. And sure enough, many studies show tha
t colo
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
urs have an impact on how customers perceive office
s. Col
Suggestion
Colours
ours that fit the personality of offices make customers more likely to negotiate. Normally, to boost creativity, incorporate green into brainstorming spaces or places where computers are used.
The
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
color
 green
also
 promotes harmony, balance, and reduces eye strain. Yellow-
the
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
color
 of sun and fun, is a welcoming, energizi
ng,
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
color
. It’s best used in creative, active environments. Red can make people feel that a room is warmer than it is. Red works well in spaces that involve physical activity or nighttime work. The importance
of
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
color
 schemes in the hospital can help patients during therapy. Gentle pas
tel co
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
lours will suit the room for patients who are short-term treatment or not more than a week, so they always feel relaxed and comfortable during treatment.
However
, for long-term treatment facilities, a too l
ight
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
color
 palette will make patients more likely to get bored and moody, because they will often have to face t
hose c
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
olours for a while. Not to mention
, the
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
colours are too taciturn or neutral
also
 makes it difficult for the elderly or patients with poor vision. Blue may be the heal
thies
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
t
color
. Blue lowers heart rate, blood pressure, and respiration, blue
also
 calms and so
othes, p
Suggestion
promote
romote trust and communication.
Moreover
, all the rooms in the hospital painted in white which is relaxation. White will be building the mood of patients to recover from their disease.
That
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
color
 will give the best impression
about c
Accept comma addition
calm, so
alm, so the patient will take a rest with quietness. In concl
usion
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
,
color
 gives an effect on a human changing mentality.
Consequ
ently
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
,
color
 schemes are often chosen for workplaces depend on people's jobs or patients.
Submitted by Vân Đặng Thanh on

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