People today often use the internet to learn about the culture of other countries. This means that it is not that important to travel to those countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The exponential growth of computers with
internet
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impacts are in every aspect of our life.
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, to learn about any part of the world's
culture
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, one does not have to
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to the place literally but on the computer screen just sitting at home.I agree that
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is true that virtually travelling and learning about the
culture
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of any part of the world reduces the travelling expenses and
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. Virtual travelling is a less
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-consuming activity. A person can do a lot more things at that
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when ones have to go to that place personally. These days, people are extremely busy and prefer to be
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because of the active competition in every part and profession of life.
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, of taking an unpaid vacation, many prefer to spend quality
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with family and friends; dine out with family; social gatherings with friends; having some BBQs evening with colleagues helps them rejuvenate themselves. If the person has a zest to know about any civilization, he can open any online video and learn about everything.
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, a few years ago, I was very keen to learn about ancient Chinese civilization, their mannerisms, their ways of having cuisine, which is very important for them. It's utterly impractical for me to visit China from Canada to buy a 1500 dollar air ticket for a week.
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, I decided to googled and learned about Chinese different customs and traditions. I have
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convinced that we should have learned from the Chinese
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, particularly their mannerisms, while eating. If someone is impoverished and cannot
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travel but
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travel, but
is interested in learning about a different
culture
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, I believe the
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is his best friend by clicking ubiquity videos available on YouTube like many documentaries;
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Logue.The cost of an
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connection is more manageable than visiting any country. If a person even doesn't afford
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internet subscription
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an internet subscription
and computer costs, there are still many web cafes available in almost every street in underdeveloped countries. According to a random survey in one community in Karachi, Pakistan comprises five million of dwellers has 500
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cafes in every other street, which means 10% of the population, which is a decent amount of shops.
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, the real-life experience trumps virtual experience, virtual
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is a
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and cost-effective option for many people around the world who are enthusiastic about learning about their favourite country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural immersion
  • virtual tours
  • biases
  • authenticity
  • cuisine
  • perpetuate
  • sustainable tourism
  • misinterpretations
  • personal relationships
  • language acquisition
  • social media platforms
  • information accessibility
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