In the last,when students did a university degree,they tended to study in their own country.Nowadays,they have more opportunity to study abroad.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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THE GLOBALIZATION IS SURGING AT THE PESENT TIME DUE TO THE INNOVATION IN THE TECHNOLOGY. BEFORE A DECADE, PUPILS HAD OBATINED A TERTIARY EDUCATION IN THE THIER HOME CONTINENTS. WHERE, NOW THEY HAVE THE OPTIONS TO ATTNED THE FOREIGN INSTITUTION AROUND THE GLOBE.

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ESSAY WOULD DISCUSS HOW TAKING EDUCATION IN THE OTHER TERITORY OFFERS A HIGH LIVING STANDARD FOR THE INDIVIDUAL AND

SECONDLY

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, HOW

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MIGRATION CAUSES THE LOOSE OF ANCIENT

CULTURE

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IN THAT BOTH NATIONS. I THINK,

ONE

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SHOULD PASSION FOR GAINING THE KNOWLEDGE RATHER THAN STATUS IN THE SOCIETY AS WITH THE PASSION

ONE

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CAN SETTLE UP ANYWHERE ON THE EARTH. ON THE

ONE

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HAND, THE MAIN ADVANTAGE OF HAVING AN INTERNATIONAL DEGREE IS THE HIGH QUALITY LIFE STYLE AND

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IS OWNING TO HIGH PAYING JOBS OPPORTUNITIES IN THOSE COUNTRIES.

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, HIGH PAYING JOBS ALLOWS A PERSON TO LIVE LIFE WITHOUT ANY BURDEN STRESS FINANCIALLY.

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WOULD MAKE THEM WILLING TO SETTLE THERE RATHER THAN THE NATIVE

COUNTRY

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. FOR THE EXAMPLE, ACCORDING TO THE CANADIAN IMMIGRATION DEPARTMENT REPORT OF THE 2019, 70% OF THE STUDENTS WHO CAME TO PURSUE THE

FURTHER

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CAREER WERE NEVER WENT BACK TO THEIR HOME

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AS CANADA HAS OFFERED THEM A PLETHORA OF CHANCES TO MAKE THEIR LIFE BETTER.

ON THE OTHER HAND

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, THE PRIME DISADVANTAGE OF

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TREND IS LOOSING THE

CULTURE

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IN BOTH NATIONS. WHEN AN INDIVIDUAL MIGRATED FROM

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CONTINENT TO ANOTHER, HE WOULD CARRY HIS OWN CUSTOMS WITH HIM, AND TRYS TO MURGE THAT IN THE MOGRATED NATION.

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WOULD DETRIMENTALLY DISTROY THE ANCIENT

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OF THE OTHER

COUNTRY

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AS THE NATIVES WOULD UNABLE TO SUSTAIN IT DUE TO SOAR IN THE IMMIGRATION NUMBER. AT THE SAME TIMME, IF THEY TRY TO ACCEPT THE NEW

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AND CUSTOMS THEY WOULD FORGET THIER OWN BY THE TIME.

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, AS PER THE CULTURAL SOCIETY OF THE USA SURVEY, 80% OF THE AMERICAN PEOPLE NOWADAYS ARE FOLLOWING THE HINDU

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INCLUDING WHITE PEOPLE OF THE USA.

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IS BECAUSE OF THE INCREASED NUMBER OF ASIAN CIVILIAN COMMUNITY. IN CONCLUSION, WHETHER IT IS A FOREIGN EDUCATION OR HOME

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, BOTH ARE INDEED ASSIST IN ACHIEVING A DESIRE GOALS.

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, SOMETIME IT MAY WEIGHT UP THE FOREIGN SIDE AS FOREIGN CONTINENTS OFFER AN EXCELLENT WAGE FOR THE HIGH SKILLED PROFESSIONALS.

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