Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes ( for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood, or teaching sports to younger children.)what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often considered that some extracurriculer activity while studing in high school gives extra edge to the students career and will be helpful to adopt the professional attire for the job prospect so
that is
why I completely agree with
this
opinion because by doing and taking part of
this
type of activity one can develope their peronality in every aspect.
First
of all I believe that when a teenager or high school student do some
community
service it will help them to improve their communication skill. They can become more inclusive into the culture.
For Example
, if you want to become politically you need to be more social and
this
quality you can build up by doing
community
services.
Secondly
.In every individual life behaviour is the most important characteristic to make happy neighbourhood.
This
behavioural lesson has to be taught in student life which I believe is possible by making compulsion of social services and
community
service in the school syllabus.It is for
this
reason I think not only education, but social activities
also
necessary. It addition the
community
service will lead students to become creative toward their professional career as well.
Further more they
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Furthermore, they
Furthermore they
learn the organisational skills too, which help them to live with better management
nevertheless
, they learnt the social values and give respect to everyone in
community
Suggestion
the community
last
but not least it helps to minimise the crime too. To conclude, As I have given a concrete reason above, I strongly agree with
this
opinion because
this
activity leads to the happy
community
and more healthier country.After all the beautiful world.
Submitted by Kiranben on

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