Some people believe that the difference between the lowest paid jobs and the highest paid jobs should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any

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Although
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, the range of wage varies among different employees working under various working profiles some people ponder that that the
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differnce
the quality of being unlike or dissimilar
difference
differences
between high pay jobs and low pay jobs should be reduced.
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, I totally disagree with
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statement because I think that the role and responsibilities in upgrade jobs are more than lower management employment. Why I think that the stipend
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differnce
the quality of being unlike or dissimilar
difference
differences
between both jobs should not be reduced? Primarily, management pays high payroll only to those working profile in which the actions and responsibilities are more than other jobs.
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, in a company top management are paying a high salary to Directors, Managers, Chief executive officers because their responsibilities are more to run a company in a smooth manner. They all are leading the whole staff as a team since they are working as a team leader. If anything goes wrong
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then they only are
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then they are only
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they are charging a high pay scale.
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, most of the highest paid jobs have the risk of life. In the defence the job of an army officer, a police officer is so risky because they are working with a huge risk in their working profile. So they have a right to get a handsome pay scale. In the contrary, some people ponder that the
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differnce
the quality of being unlike or dissimilar
difference
differences
between the salary between both working profiles ought to be reduced. They think like that because they are focusing on the right of equality. In simple words, these people want that every person should have equal right to earn same as another person. If two persons are working in a same organisation with same working hours,
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why should they have different wages.
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, equal wages will definitely promote equality in society that means the slope of the difference between rich and poor class will decline.
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, it has been demanded by some people to cut the wage difference. To sum up, Undoubtedly, there is a lot of
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differnce
the quality of being unlike or dissimilar
difference
differences
between the salary of various job profiles nowadays.
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is because people are charging their wages as per their qualification, experience and the aspect of their working. I think that they totally deserve that appropriate to get high income because they're part playing is more than other jobs.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • income inequality
  • equitable
  • living standards
  • disadvantaged individuals
  • social unrest
  • crime rates
  • wage disparities
  • supply and demand
  • high-skilled workers
  • incentivize
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