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Do you think the significance of English language as an international language will be lost with globalization or its significance will increase with globalization? What is your opinion?

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English
 has become a prominent
language
 in
this
 modern era. Globalisation has become a worldwide phenomenon. There are a lot of advancements and changes are happening in everyone's life
due to
the
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globalization. It changed
this
world
 as an open market, anyone can exchange or learn anything. Few people argue that
due to
the
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globalization,
English
's significance will decrease, but I don't agree with them and I will explain why in
this
 essay with some examples. Technical advancements in today's
world
 brought everything close and available to
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everyone.
This
 made
easy
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it easy
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 to learn anything either a
language
 or a course,
communication
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and communication
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 barriers are broken
due to
this
 facility. We can talk or communicate in any
language
 others can understand in their own
language
.These advancements are reducing the chances of dependency on any particular
language
. Many think,
this
 is the end of the dominance of
the
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English
on
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world
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 and they point out the increasing numbers of
the
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other
language
 speakers. We should agree,
globalization
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that globalization
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 made many languages
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 into focus, but it doesn't mean it is the end of
English
.
English
 became an international
language
due to
 its flexibility and
easy to learn
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 nature. The political dominance of
world
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 by
English speaking
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English-speaking
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 countries is another reason behind
the
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English
's growth. It is not that easy to erase
it
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its
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 impact on
world
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the world
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 because
still
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still,
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 everything
in
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internet
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the internet
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 is in
English
. Information technology, which is the main reason for all of
this
 is completely based on few
English speaking
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 countries.
To conclude
, even the growth of other languages never reduces the prominence of
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English
.
Submitted by dheerajsudarsanam on

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