Buying on the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

The

internet

Use synonyms

has become an integral part of human life. Nowadays, have seen a growing/ widespread popularity in the

internet

Use synonyms

shopping for a variety of items including books, magazines, and travel tickets as well as basic needs. Despite exposure to the risk of being hacked which is natural

to

Suggestion

for

all types of the

internet

Use synonyms

activity, it seems to me that its benefits including saving money and time not only outnumber but

Linking Words

also outweigh

Suggestion

also outweighs

its drawbacks.

First

Linking Words

of all, the benefits of the buying through the

internet

Use synonyms

seem to be countless. For one thing, with just several clicks, the

internet

Use synonyms

users are able to compare price lists and order their

favorite

something regarded with special favor or liking

favourite

goods and services for another, great flexibility

in

Suggestion

with

shopping time 24 hours a day make it fabulous.

Thus

Linking Words

, it is unnecessary to go to shopping

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

or local shops in order to purchase food and vegetables. More importantly, the majority of the

internet

Use synonyms

stores offer special discounts and suggest the most affordable goods with the same quality. Free flow of information gives customers opportunity to obtain detailed information about their

favorite

something regarded with special favor or liking

favourite

goods and brands.

Additionally

Linking Words

, the

internet

Use synonyms

makes most services including delivery service, booking hotels and travel tickets readily available.

Consequently

Linking Words

, there has been a considerable decline in traffic jams due to

wide spread

widely circulated or diffused

widespread

use of the

internet

Use synonyms

in most mega cities.

Nevertheless

Linking Words

, costumers have to be careful in revealing their personal information

since

Suggestion

from

some of payment websites are fake and unreliable that makes online payments unsecure. If they did not observe the security instructions, they would encounter credit-card fraud. Other drawbacks of online

shopping including

Accept comma addition

shopping, including

delay in delivery might be inconsiderable,

however

Linking Words

it occurs. By way of conclusion, it is my personal belief that buying on the

internet

Use synonyms

can be fabulous and its

benefits particularly

Accept comma addition

benefits, particularly

availability

Suggestion

the availability

of online stores overrides

it

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

drawbacks to a great extent.