Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money?

It is commonly believed that entertainers and sports athletes should be paid

high

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higher

salaries as they gain their publicity through hard work

and dedication of years

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and years of dedication

.

However

, I tend to believe that these people are paid in excess and I will be

analyzing

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analysing

some reasons to support my claim.

Firstly

, essential professions other than entertainment or sport must not be underestimated. Jobs like teaching, medicine and

architecting

, too, require determination and studying at university throughout

years

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the years

. But they have annual earnings which cannot sometimes be equal to that of celebrities for one endorsement in

advertisement

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the advertisement

. The lives of policemen, lifeguards or firefighters might stay at risk, which is rarely considered when it comes to payment. Admittedly, all these professionals should be rewarded with better remuneration. The aforementioned factors suggest that majority of payments need

reallocating

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to reallocate

from

entertainment industry

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the entertainment industry

to more vital fields.

Secondly

, celebrities do not always use their income wisely

although

they receive exorbitant amounts. To be more precise, they often waste money on amusement or spend it just to display their wealth.

For instance

, some movie stars or sportsmen tend to regularly buy expensive houses, the latest car models and the like.

Furthermore

, many actors and singers enjoy arranging ornate parties to gather other famous people

instead

of distributing

this

prosperity to the needy. These all expenditures require

enormous amount

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an enormous amount

of money. Above all, it is really offensive when they neglect the lower-class people because of the vanity based on their reaches. In conclusion, I opine that constant work of genuine professionals for developing our society deserve much more financial support than almost worthless expenditure of celebrities.